I love it, Ellen! You should illustrate children's books. seriously.
ONE suggestion, otherwise...love all of them. Amanda is right, you should be sending out your stuff to children's book editors! The highlight on the cloud above his head is a little too white, the rest of the sky is so gray and also my eye keeps resting there. -Sam.I love these concepts though, they're all really strong compositions, the lamp shade tilted back is fucking me up in a good way, so smart it keeps you right in the frame!